Post by Lone Fuzz Machine on Sept 4, 2008 17:22:14 GMT -5
This is a little part of a story i am thinking of continuing to write. Let me know if u think i shoudl continue.
Story outline/Plot and the Story
Characters
Matthew Driver [a.k.a Matt]
Tyler King [a.k.a TK]
Rebecca Bloomberg [a.k.a Bekka]
Chantal Bloomberg
Setting
Equestrian Academy
In Virginia
Called Ringtail equestrian Academy
“We’re here,” squealed an over excited Rebecca as her father drove up the paved drive in their pickup. Bekka’s head whipped around. Taking in the white fenced fields, the variety of horses grazing in them and the brown and white barns as they passed by. “Chill out Bekka, its only school afterall,” Chantal reminded her. Bekka took a moment to glance at her sister. A sigh escaped her lips as she thought about the girl by the window. They were techniqually twins but were truly completely different. Their personalities and looks were as different form each other as an apple from an orange. Rebecca was tall, curvy and had the look of a backcountry redneck. With long, but straight red hair, with dreamy blue eyes that almost always looked determined. Meanwhile Chantal was short, slim, a city looking girl. Her blonde hair was straight as well but cropped short, just below her chin. Her brown eyes were nothing striking, her features plain.
Sitting in the drivers side of the pickup, there dad laughed. “Awe Chantal, let Bek have her fun,” he said and tousled Bekka’s hair.
Story outline/Plot and the Story
Characters
Matthew Driver [a.k.a Matt]
Tyler King [a.k.a TK]
Rebecca Bloomberg [a.k.a Bekka]
Chantal Bloomberg
Setting
Equestrian Academy
In Virginia
Called Ringtail equestrian Academy
“We’re here,” squealed an over excited Rebecca as her father drove up the paved drive in their pickup. Bekka’s head whipped around. Taking in the white fenced fields, the variety of horses grazing in them and the brown and white barns as they passed by. “Chill out Bekka, its only school afterall,” Chantal reminded her. Bekka took a moment to glance at her sister. A sigh escaped her lips as she thought about the girl by the window. They were techniqually twins but were truly completely different. Their personalities and looks were as different form each other as an apple from an orange. Rebecca was tall, curvy and had the look of a backcountry redneck. With long, but straight red hair, with dreamy blue eyes that almost always looked determined. Meanwhile Chantal was short, slim, a city looking girl. Her blonde hair was straight as well but cropped short, just below her chin. Her brown eyes were nothing striking, her features plain.
Sitting in the drivers side of the pickup, there dad laughed. “Awe Chantal, let Bek have her fun,” he said and tousled Bekka’s hair.